This week there were 5 prompt words that the children had to use in their 100 word challenge.These two were very good...even though they didn't quite make 100 words.
The prompt words were...pink gorilla grand bicycle laughed
Here's Maddie's
One funny, money morning there was an old woman called Abigail. She rode her bike to the zoo and she paid to go in with her money.She saw a gorilla. It was big, fat,ugly and warty so she went to hide behind the cage.Suddenly the gorilla saw her and gave her a big hug. Ahhhhhhh Abigail said, he's not so ugly after all!
This one is Charlotte's.
These are some facts about Grand Gorillas put into a story.
Did you know that Grand Gorillas ride pink bicycles and that they are friends with crocodiles?
The crocodiles laughed at the Grand Gorillas riding around on their pink bicycles.Then the clock struck midnight and all the gorillas and crocodiles started dancing, till 1'o'clock! Did you know that the Grand Gorillas live in a disco zoo? The zoo opened at 2'o'clock in the morning.If you want to visit you have to go to www.Grand Gorillas.uk.com
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